Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Mr. Collins, a funny nightmare.

Mr. Collins is such an amusing character because he is a nightmare. He starts out but coming to the Bennet's in search of a wife. He causes a dispute with Lizzy resulting in an awkward situation for her. Then after being rejected he purposes to another lady. This man is going wilding, throwing marriage around like it is a joke. Then he warns Lizzy about Mr. Darcy with a letter and does nothing but make a fool of himself.

Essay #1 Comments

Clearly my number one issues is proof reading and revision. I have many good ideas on the paper, however they are not placed together properly. If i am able to take my ideas, link them together, to create a smooth flowing paper then I have a much better paper. Last my MLA formatting was played around with when using the copy and paste method to upload, i will not do that on my next turinitin.com assignment.

Sunday, September 19, 2010

Essay Review #3

I read a handful of Essays and decided out of a bunch i liked L for Latitia's essay the most. Her? essay is one of the most clear and well structured essays. From her intro paragraph alone and her essay maps. Her paragraphs relate back to her thesis and essay maps, which all still stay focused on her topic of various types of introductions. She has great quotes which she uses and quotes with in her paper. Over all the essay was top off with a solid conclusion which perfectly summarized the essay as a whole.

Essay Review #2

Review of A2, B2, and C2. I liked B2 the most because it was the most pleasant to read. Not only was it able to keep the flow perfect it was able to analyze every aspect of Darcy. In addition it had no grammar errors. Most importantly the author stayed on topic throughout the entire essay.

Essay Review Number 1

Read Essays 1, 2, and 3. I liked essay B because the focus is on first impressions. First impressions are always the most important thus making this a good start for a good essay. The other 2 essays did not have as a strong topic or go into as great of detail as B did.

Friday, September 10, 2010

Preview: Austen's Narration vs her Characters' Gossip

Austen uses narration in a specific way to give readers a certain first impression, while through the gossip and conversations among characters allow for readers to learn about the characters through the eyes of others. These opposing views causes for a variety of perspectives and opinions.